Saturday, March 1, 2014

The Last Smile

Bunty, one of the naughtiest children on earth, was the ring leader of some similar minds. It’s quite unnatural to be so famous in the village for a twelve year’s old. People warned their children not to be friend with Bunty. But he had no qualms of his deeds. His day starts as early as at five in the morning after his father goes to the farm. He rides his bicycle and goes to the river bank where his group waits for him. Then the action starts for the whole day. They let loose somebody’s cows to someone’s farm, do their shooting practice in Haria’s Mango farm, throw cow dung and water in their school classrooms so that nobody can sit in the floor and the school would remain closed. These were only a few examples of what they do or what Bunty asks them to do. Then they used to come to the river bank again and would show their swimming talents.

People of the village were tired of complaining his father, Ramesh time and again. But Ramesh could not do much about it. Bunty is his only son. Bunty’s mother Meera died when Bunty was only six years old. Ramesh is a farmer and he has to work in the farm from early morning to evening. So he could not take care of Bunty well enough. He also did not want to re-marry even though his family and friends encouraged him a lot. He loved his wife very much and he didn’t want to give her place to anyone else. Many times he thought of sending Bunty to his uncle’s house in the town. But his love for Bunty didn’t let him do that too. He didn’t want him to go away from him. Bunty also loves his father. He stops his mischievous deeds when someone scolds his father but only for few days. Then he makes that person’s life even more miserable. So now-a-days, nobody dares to say anything.

As days progressed, Bunty’s naughtiness touched new heights. One day during Diwali, he sends a rocket straight to Ravi’s cattle-shed. Luckily neither the cattle nor any human being got hurt. After that incident, Ramesh decided to send Bunty to his in-law’s house. Children of his age were doing well in academics but Bunty never crossed standard three. Ramesh was concerned, if he wouldn’t do anything soon then his son surely would lag behind others. He wanted his son to be well educated and get a better job than farming. He always threatens Bunty to send there to stop his misdeeds and Bunty always promises not to repeat those. But this time it was different. Ramesh had decided to send him at any cost.

Bunty took it lightly as he was sure his father would not send him. The next day Ramesh did not go to the farm and packed Bunty’s bag. Bunty was still sure that he was not going to his uncle’s house. Ramesh took the bag and Bunty to Biju’s snack shop near the road side. They waited for the only bus to the village that comes twice a day to take people from the surrounding villages to the nearest town, where Bunty’s uncle lives.

Bunty could hear the grudging sound of the bus from the distance and started to feel that his father is sending him in real. He wanted to flee but Ramesh knew that earlier and so he was holding his hand tightly. Bunty cried and tried his best to get rid of his father and to run away but with no success. Ramesh was too strong a man to defeat. In next three hours they reached Bunty’s uncle, Amar’s house. Ramesh told everything about Bunty to Amar. The next morning he left for the village leaving Bunty in the town.

“Amar” is very strict and always keeps an eye on Bunty. Going out of the house became difficult for Bunty. Even if he does so there were no friends to play with; no pond to swim, no canal to catch fish, no garden to aim the mango trees and no wish to do all those stuffs too. He felt alone and remained silent most of the time. Sometimes he cried remembering his friends at his village and remembering his father. He mumbles in sleep, “Please papa, take me out of here, I won’t do any mischief, and I’ll go to school regularly. Please take me out of here.” Then he wakes up suddenly in fear with sweat all over his face. He went to school but he was not enjoying that too. He becomes lonely day by day. He even gets lean and thin. Once he broke his cousin sister’s pencil nib accidentally and he was scolded and beaten by his uncle and aunt. He was forced to do a lot of works at home.

After some three months, Ramesh came to see him. Bunty became so happy for the first time since he came there. He did not let his father go far from him. He hugged him tightly and told him to take him with him to the village. Ramesh too was missing his lovable son. But Amar told Ramesh that Bunty was improving by day and he should stay there if he wants his growth. But the stark truth was something else; Amar had got a free servant at his house, how could he let him go so easily!

Now again 3 months gone. It was winter. Bunty was sleeping in the kitchen room and he was not provided with any winter sheets. He could not sleep all night due to cold and felt sick the other day. His eyes were looking hollow and his ribs were visible now. He was looking so lean. He could not get up from the floor in the morning. But his aunt pulled him to make him stand and be ready for the school. He hardly made one step forward when he fell down with a thud. His aunt scolded him and told him not to make any acting. But he, for the first time did not listen to her, rather he could not listen to her. His uncle came running when his wife’s scream could not create any responses of Bunty.

Bunty’s whole body was pale and hot. His eyes were half-closed. He was mumbling some unclear words. Sometimes he speaks out his friend’s names aloud and sometimes he calls his father. There was no phone in the village. Amar had sent the message to Ramesh through the bus conductor. Ramesh got the news only in the evening but he could not reach the town before next afternoon. He was worried like any other father. He also could not get to sleep and cursed himself to make his son go away from him.

Bunty’s condition was getting worse. He still did not get his sense back and continued to mumble. Amar called a doctor and got some medicines for Bunty. He let him sleep in his bed and comforted him. He also felt bad for his rude behaviours towards him. But it was too late to repent.

Ramesh reached Amar’s house the next afternoon and hugs his son intimately. Though Bunty could not open his eyes but he gave a little smile getting his father’s touch. Ramesh was crying and cursing himself and trying to wake Bunty up. Bunty did not eat anything from the previous day. Ramesh tried to feed him milk through a spoon. But the milk was not going through his throat and kept coming out.

Ramesh prayed his God and begged for his child’s life. Bunty mumbled again, “Papa, take me with you, I won’t be naughty, I’ll listen to you, please come to me papa”. Ramesh held him tight and told he was with him and he came to take him to the village. Bunty opened his eyes, gave a bright smile and soon closed his eyes. The smile he wore as if was leading him to the treasure of gross soothes of his father’s touch that never stopped hiding itself even though rest of his body was getting ready to be burnt over.

Copyrights: 
Aama Odisha e-Magazine
6th Edition
P.S.: Thanks to Amit Kumar Pattnaik & Bijaylaxmi Sarangi for the edits